Feeding the light, nothing is ours

Poetic Dan

The reason I feel children feed our light
As words don't just come from the mind

They flow so beautifully like wind gently moving the meadows
Can change direction but nothing to restrict it

In awareness of the creations that's helping create me
Their struggle is mine from our falls we all see

The journey is a blessing not always illuminated well
Even when it's only moments to moments
That come and then go or never to know

The energy from the laughter
Is food for the soul
The hugs and the tears
Is more precious than gold

They are our constant reminder
To love, express, cry, laugh and let go
Everything changes nothing is ours
Shine as all of this is because of us



  • Author: Poetic Dan (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 20th, 2017 19:12
  • Comment from author about the poem: Rambling thoughts after an awesome night with me sprouts.
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 21
  • Users favorite of this poem: Accidental Poet, Laura๐ŸŒป
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  • Accidental Poet

    A really great write here Dan. Nice to see you enjoying some time with your kids. You all look so happy together. Nothing like kids being with dad, or dad being with his kids.

    • Poetic Dan

      Thank you my friend are tucking them in, I got in to bed and the words started to flow so I had to write them out.
      I see why I write it now, to hopefully read back on the days that I can not be with them, thank you for that help hope I'm listening!

    • FredPeyer

      PD, love the picture of the three kids, yes, you are included! ๐Ÿ™‚
      Enjoy every precious moment, and writing a poem about it is genius!

      • Poetic Dan

        Cheers buddy, glad to be of service

      • Laura๐ŸŒป

        Awesome pic, Dan!
        So happy and cheerful!
        Great moments to remember and cherish! Enjoyed the write! A fave to save! All the best to you and your children!

        ~Laura~

        • Poetic Dan

          Most definitely moments to keep the blood pumping, thank you so much for your kind words

        • Caring dove

          i think many words can come the beauty and love in our life .. nice piece of writing dan ๐Ÿ™‚

          • Poetic Dan

            Thank you for bring me back here ๐Ÿ˜‰



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