I think I could lay here for awhile
I wish I could forget your smile
The way you gazed into my eyes
You leaving me is no surprise
Cause I was never good enough
I know that sometimes I am rough
But I would have tried to fix me for you
I would have done all I could do
Am I really such a mess
That our love just brought you stress
When I held your hand I could have flown
The warmth of you was beautiful and unknown
But when you held mine, I was a weight
Another problem on your plate
I held you down, I never wanted that
And when you left I fell with a splat
You fly away, like you should
Please try to live a life that's good
You deserve everything you dream
I'll drown my sorrows in ice cream
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Author:
Naeners (
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Beautiful poem that you have here 🙂
very very good 🙂 i love the ending , referring to ice cream . i love how you bring reference to him making you want to fly away , this gives off almost a high and dreamy feel to your words , i also like how you feel like to him you are only a weight and you fall off the plate with a splat.. i like the light heartedness you bring to this piece, nicely done , enjoyed , nice flow and feel to this piece too , welld done
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