Unfit

Naeners

I think I could lay here for awhile

 

I wish I could forget your smile

 

The way you gazed into my eyes

 

You leaving me is no surprise

 

Cause I was never good enough

 

I know that sometimes I am rough

 

But I would have tried to fix me for you

 

I would have done all I could do

 

Am I really such a mess

 

That our love just brought you stress

 

When I held your hand I could have flown

 

The warmth of you was beautiful and unknown

 

But when you held mine, I was a weight

 

Another problem on your plate

 

I held you down, I never wanted that

 

And when you left I fell with a splat

 

You fly away, like you should

 

Please try to live a life that's good

 

You deserve everything you dream

 

I'll drown my sorrows in ice cream

  • Author: Naeners (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 26th, 2017 01:13
  • Comment from author about the poem: Please tell me what you think, constructive criticism is always welcomed.
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  • space_girl

    Beautiful poem that you have here 🙂

  • Caring dove

    very very good 🙂 i love the ending , referring to ice cream . i love how you bring reference to him making you want to fly away , this gives off almost a high and dreamy feel to your words , i also like how you feel like to him you are only a weight and you fall off the plate with a splat.. i like the light heartedness you bring to this piece, nicely done , enjoyed , nice flow and feel to this piece too , welld done



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