Sacrilege.
The pink fleshy fruit is sweet enough
On its own
If you let expectations fall away
and appreciate the spicy bitterness as it
Bursts across your tongue.
The sparkling juice flowers sweetly.
A complex cadenza of flavors
Yet simple in its purity;
Like newly fallen snow
Under a crisp wind
and bathed in golden sunrays.
Don't dare mar its natural purity
With a coat of sugar,
To overpower it's inherent sweetness,
Douse the original honest medley,
and spoil your dulled taste buds.
For then the lime will be only what you think
you want it to be,
The lemon will be cloaked in shroud to appease your soft pleasures,
but you will miss it's raw truth.
There must be some tart bite with the mellow sigh,
Some bitterness with the sweet.
Nevertheless, if you snuff out the fire
In trying to change it,
Only you have lost it,
For it will burn again
Another day
Another place
to warm someone else's heart.
For if you abhor the honest flavor,
Never say what you mean,
Always tend toward the calm waters,
Never commit to convictions,
And repose in the soft, shy veil
of pleasing and unassuming deceptions.
Then you live as one asleep.
A carthorse who has put up it's own blinders,
and can't see the road between it's own shoes,
let alone the holes ahead.
Ignorance is bliss until you wake up.
Until you taste the bright and juicy notes
And savor the partnership between sour and bitter that
smacks your lips and draws a puckered inhale.
The racing wind that quickens your footsteps and resolve,
Exhilarates your senses with zest
For Life. Ah;
Sugar? Sacrilege.
- Author: Elizabethan Sea ( Offline)
- Published: December 27th, 2017 19:49
- Comment from author about the poem: There are about three planned meanings in this poem. First of all the simple and cute debate that fruits don't need sugar to taste delicious and be enjoyable. Not even citrus like grapefruits, lemons and limes. In their pure, natural form that beautiful compilation of flavors is so interesting and lovely on it's own. Of course, some enjoy sugar added to these to balance out the bitter and sour and there's nothing wrong with that. The tastes are more a matter of opinion and tastes, but the second and third meanings use the pure unsweetened state as a metaphor. The second meaning has to do with making people into what you want them to be. When you are close to someone sometimes it is tempting to want to change what you don't like about them and make them more like yourself or suited to your tastes. If they are your family or a best friend you have known for a long time you may even expect them to be more like you. However, accepting their differences, making room for them and appreciating them allows you to appreciate them for who they are; and it lets them know that you love and care about them the way that they are. A person's spark separates them from others, gives them choice, decision, likes, dislikes, behaviors, individuality, purpose. Appreciate them and stroke that spark, or douse it out. But it will be impossible to douse it, so one would be burned, or the spark will leave them. The third meaning is more about ones own outlook and response to the world and their interactions with it. These days many are afraid of causing offense to others and seek to appease, diffuse disagreements, and soothe feelings. They're afraid to stand firm on their own beliefs for fear of others disapproving and showing offense. Everyone wants to be liked and having a group of people supporting you makes you feel stronger, fuller and more secure, but at the cost of subduing and pushing your own choices and beliefs under the bed you couldn't be more weak and empty. On the one hand, harmony, respect for others choices and their right to be themselves is important, but not at the sacrifice of your right to be yourself. People should be able to discuss disagreements, understand each other, and respect each other's right to choice and free will without hurting each other or hating each other. Two friends could disagree on a certain design, food flavors, colors, plans, activities and many more things, because of their differences as individuals, but that doesn't mean that there has to be animosity or great conflict between them. You should be confident in who you have decided to be, your carefully thought out decisions, your strong beliefs, and core values. That kind of strong foundation gives you strength and roots of dependability. Not the shifty sand that blows every which way the wind takes its whim. Also, it's a pull between lies and the truth. When you blur boundaries too much so that there are no likes or dislikes, there is no right or wrong, and you have no very firm unwavering beliefs you have drawn a veil of lies between yourself and the truth. Layer on more mist to blur the edges and complicate things with more explanation, scenarios, and rules to avoid having marked differences and it becomes very difficult to cipher out the truth again and decide what you really want. However, without all of those distractions, misleading conceptions of your purposes and goals, and sugarcoating, you are left with your clean and pure goals, dreams, drives, and beliefs that come individually from you. A cute poem with some much deeper and important meanings.
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