Be careful when you bang because it might be all for nothing.
You might get pushed out & put out.
You might be down & out.
You might get left out while strung out.
You might fall out & never get out.
You might end up by yourself & people'll always doubt what you're about.
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Author:
KRM (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Hitting bottom opens your eyes & your mind. Never quit.
- Category: Reflection
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I like your 'out' poem. So when you hit that bottom, you have to shout OUT, to be heard and taken OUT of your misery. And then, life will be again OUT of this world!
you've figured it OUT! 🙂
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