Beautiful Wave

NaomiRayne

Passion, check

Spirit, check

Desire, check

But excuse me, I lost the ability

For I can't find my skill

This talent I'm not capable of accomplishing

Oh my

My burning longing

My yearning desire

My craving thirst I have for this salt water

How I watch your qualities form in the shape and color of this beautiful wave

Different reflections of myself you show to me

You running through my hair and fingers, reveals truths I've been questioning

How I watch this movement you perform

I, out of need, completely give myself to you-you take me in and I disappear

But to ride you, to be carried, supported, apart of your movement

Maybe I have a fear of your momentum

A respect of your motion

So my passion

My spirit 

My desire

I will continue to put towards these waves

The waves of power,

Strength,

Energy,

Force

I will gain trust

and no longer fear

 

 

 

 

 

 

  • Author: Rayne (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 5th, 2018 09:07
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 19
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Comments2

  • FredPeyer

    What I really like about your well written poem is that I can read it literally. The wave really is a wave. Or, I can substitute nearly anything I want for the wave. Use it as a metaphor for love, for example.
    Well done Rayne (or do you prefer Naomi?)

    • NaomiRayne

      Thanks so much! This is a subject that can be taken serious or light too thats why I like to see what people get from it, and Rayne or Naomi is fine, Naomi is my first name Rayne is my middle

      • FredPeyer

        Living in Hawaii, I think I go with Naomi! 🙂

      • poelove

        I agree /fear is the barrier to talents unaccomplished and trust is the threshold..nice write Rayne



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