If you feel that the universe is not responding



If you feel that the universe is not responding,

It is because you need to be more proactive in making waves.

This is the universe of all things and we are all connected.

Don’t sit there and wait for attention.

Don't cave-in your snail-home with self-pity.

Take action!

With clarity, direction, intention,  passion, and motivation.

Remember, other people have other rhythmic  and density  of responsiveness ways.

Their vibrations may not be harmonically in chords with yours.

Sometimes you will be surprised with "when and how".

Nevertheless, this is the universe of all things and we are all connected.


  • Author: AVIGAIL (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 6th, 2018 12:30
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 18
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  • FredPeyer

    Great, thought provoking poem, Avigail! As per Nike: Just do it!
    You know, we all need a kick in the behind once in a while!

    • avigail

      yes Fred we all need a kick .This poem reflects and talks back at me as well 🙂 hugs====

    • Elsie

      This is where I am, sat at home, trying to reconnect after looking after my Dad for 18 months; I need to get a life again! I know it has to be me to 'make some waves' cos people won't knock on my door if I don't knock at theirs! This poem really resonates with me.

      • avigail

        hugs Elsie i wish you success in 2018

        • Elsie

          Thankyou, I need hugs, Avigail!! I have only just found this site, but it is such a comfort already. I love the power of words.

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        • Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose)

          i cannot help but agree with this . i liked this 🙂

          • avigail

            thank you Charlotte 🙂

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