Vicious Cycle (10 words)

Syd

Self inflicted 
Pain

Doctor...I'm Sane??

Diagnosis
Incomplete

Prescription
Repeat

  • Author: Syd (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 7th, 2018 08:40
  • Comment from author about the poem: Originally written for a ten word challenge poem, but fits in nicely with how I'm feeling at the moment
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 34
  • Users favorite of this poem: Laura🌻, Accidental Poet
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  • orchidee

    A fine write Syd.

    • Syd

      Thank you Orchidee.

    • Laura🌻

      Syd,
      Welcome to my world...at this very moment! My first read of the day and it befits how I feel today! Good write! Going right into my faves!

      ~Laura~

      • Syd

        Thanks very much Laura. Glad you enjoyed - Syd

        • Laura🌻

          You’re welcome!

        • Accidental Poet

          Syd, life is a cycle. And everyone knows it's ups and downs. In accepting this we learn to expect the downward swing and brace for it, giving us that edge of strength to overcome it for the sunrise brings a new day with new challenges. May you take those challenges and make them your victories of honor. Great write.

          • Syd

            Thanks accidental poet. Those are good words of support and advice.

            - Syd

            • Accidental Poet

              You're welcome Syd. Words I myself try to live by.

            • FredPeyer

              Some of the best 10 words I ever read, and read again, and read again...

              • Syd

                Really? Thanks ever so much Fred.

                - Syd

                • FredPeyer

                  yes, really!

                • Syd

                  Hi James, I agree with what you say about medication, the majority of people genuinely need them.

                  Here in the UK under the government starved NHS the doctors and nurses do the best they can. A lot a people I know where I live get the impression that the local GPs just don't want to listen to you properly and are quite happy to write a prescription just to get you processed and back out of the door.

                  As for my sobriety, I'm only a week in. I'll admit it is hard though with no support.

                  Thanks - Syd



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