I wish to send dead roses to my ex.....
For she used to make me feel happiness, now all she makes me feel is regret
I hope the decaying flowers remind her of how our love quickly soured
How her ice maidens touch poisoned our love.... Just like those decaying flowers
We parted ways to much happier days and I'm so happy she is gone...
So I ask the florist specifically, "send dead roses and leave the thorns on"
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Author:
Syd (
Offline) - Published: January 8th, 2018 05:39
- Comment from author about the poem: Originally written as a stanza for a fusioned poem. Fiction
- Category: Love
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Comments5
This is nice. amen.
Thank you syddie, glad you enjoyed.
- Syd
Ahh the thorns too. So it wasn't just all sweet-smelling roses?
Yes the thorns too Orchidee, it is just a fictional poem though.
Thanksfor reading - Syd
Well written, Syd! But if you are happy now, maybe she did you a favor. 🙂
Kind of reminds me of people sending somebody a dead fish.
Lol! A dead fish. Yes I get where you're coming from. Yes I'm very happy now. Have been for many years. The poem is fiction anyway, I was just trying something different.
Thanks for reading - Syd
Ah - this read gave me a slow smile Syd - some partners need a reminder to un-ice and the finalé gives the sting in its tail - - "leave the thorns on" is a gem of an ending.
Thank you Fay. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem and on my part it is nice to write about something different for a change - Syd
Thanks ever so much Santita. Yes I remember that you too contributed to the fusioned poem. I had to put a bit of darkness in my contribution, that's just me being me.
Take care - Syd
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