Hold The Sun Up

Naeners

Hold the sun up in my sky

 

Don't let it weigh you down

 

If it goes

 

I know I know

 

I'll end up under ground

 

I can't let it fall for even a second

 

Not move even an inch

 

Cause if it goes

 

I know I know

 

What will happen then

 

When it rains it pours

 

It's hard to soar

 

With tears dribbling down

 

So don't let it drop

 

Stay up top

 

Keep it high in the sky

 

Cause we both know

 

When the rain falls

 

So do I

 

  • Author: Naeners (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 12th, 2018 23:52
  • Comment from author about the poem: Please tell me what you think. Constructive criticism is always welcome.
  • Category: Unclassified
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Comments1

  • Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose)

    i really like this .. you make it sound as if you are like a bird in the sky at peace and flying , but you fear the rain appearing and your forthcoming fall ... it sounds like someone who is fearing sinking back down into depression , maybe ? for sure, it is certainly hard to soar when we are weighed down by pain / rain .. good piece of writing , enjoyed



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