Hold the sun up in my sky
Don't let it weigh you down
If it goes
I know I know
I'll end up under ground
I can't let it fall for even a second
Not move even an inch
Cause if it goes
I know I know
What will happen then
When it rains it pours
It's hard to soar
With tears dribbling down
So don't let it drop
Stay up top
Keep it high in the sky
Cause we both know
When the rain falls
So do I
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Naeners (
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i really like this .. you make it sound as if you are like a bird in the sky at peace and flying , but you fear the rain appearing and your forthcoming fall ... it sounds like someone who is fearing sinking back down into depression , maybe ? for sure, it is certainly hard to soar when we are weighed down by pain / rain .. good piece of writing , enjoyed
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