Tom.H

I'll be waiting

This moment in time you push me away,

its fine, I can't promise; i'll do this my own way

I'll sit back and watch this everclicking clock

just till the daý when you realise i'll stay

My hopes are with you from this distance right now

Good luck my love, i'm so very very proud 

Of this hardwork and effort, 

With which you light up the crowd

Comments1

  • Aislinn Wilson

    Something about this sticks, but I can't pinpoint it. I was curious if the occasional uncapitalized first person pronouns "I" was intentional? I'm also quite curious about the choice of "dáy"?
    I really enjoy this though



To be able to comment and rate this poem, you must be registered. Register here or if you are already registered, login here.