This moment in time you push me away,
its fine, I can't promise; i'll do this my own way
I'll sit back and watch this everclicking clock
just till the daý when you realise i'll stay
My hopes are with you from this distance right now
Good luck my love, i'm so very very proud
Of this hardwork and effort,
With which you light up the crowd
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Author:
Tom.H (
Offline) - Published: January 15th, 2018 18:45
- Category: Love
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Comments1
Something about this sticks, but I can't pinpoint it. I was curious if the occasional uncapitalized first person pronouns "I" was intentional? I'm also quite curious about the choice of "dáy"?
I really enjoy this though
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