I had a tunnel with so much light went deeper consumed by darkness in a world how could you be so heartless who really care when they say money is the root of all evil so I tried to get deep rooted but in this soil there is in life here but it's some where this seed must grow I searched around but no one seem to know I get trapped by paranoia I see things that's not really there but dam so that could mean that I'm over looking things that is already there I open my eyes and think a little if there is truth to this dam I'm a lil pissed it's wasn't the soil that was tainted just the mind painting a different picture. Picture this take these words see how far you go only thing to stop you is that person walking in your shoes so now I choose to listen open my eyes and get tunnel vision I took this seed planted it in your soil see how much your mind has grown
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interesting enjoyable read ... being under the soil would be very dark indeed but being a seed we can make our way on out , maybe into a flower who can see everything clearly .. very nicely done
A thinking mans poem, Podno!
Indeed
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