We all want things out of life
A new car
A big house
Lots of money
One want most overlooked
Was important
More than cars
And houses
And money
Something everyone wants
But also something WE need
It can save lives
But can also end them
Ruin them
Or fix the worst life
When you look for that satisfaction
in their eyes
In their smile
The way they walk
The way they talk
That feeling
Four letters
But worth millions
That feeling
LOVE
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Author:
C-pain (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: January 19th, 2018 13:39
- Category: Fantasy
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Comments2
hello , i like how you started with writing about materialistic things then brought in the idea of love ... '' worth millions '' interesting how you brought in the word millions to describe love , money is nothing in comparision to love but i like the relation between the two
Interesting transition!
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