Notice of absence from hiandbyes
I’m in counselling and in and out of a residential. I’ll be back ASAP.
I’m in counselling and in and out of a residential. I’ll be back ASAP.
She was a garden.
I was just a flower
Small and unnoticed in the
Fields of beauty
She was a garden,
I was just a flower.
She had more to offer
She had prettier petals,
Strong stems and
Me?
I was just plain to the eye, a flower
That you’d rather crunch than care for a
Flower that nobody knew the name of and
A flower that nobody cared for.
She might have had a whole garden
But I was a flower
That had better intentions than the field
Would’ve ever had for you.
So all I ask of you, handsome is
To look deep into my petals
And read my story
Before you run into the field of roses,
Because who knows?
Roses have lots of thorns.
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Comments4
hello , i completely love this poem , so lovely , so beautiful .. 🙂 you feel like this girl has more to offer and you do not feel enough for him , i love how you spoke of yourself as one small flower , her as the garden and your wish for him to take a look deep into your petals, the ending is just great! so true, so true , roses have a lot a lot of thorns and a whole field of roses .. lol , wow he would get hurt .. brilliant piece of writing , i really enjoyed reading this
Thank you!! Honestly great feedback, much appreciated x
Inspirational work... Short of words but not of feeling. Thank you kindly
🙂
Awesome write
Thank you !
Welcome
God this is good! I love inanimate objects speaking to us and for us.
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