Loss of time I could have spent better
Mislaying car keys, that important letter,
Overlooking appointments I should keep
Frustrating but not a time to weep.
Loss of money, haemorrhage of cash
Business crash - decisions that were rash,
Lost my way, in a black hole, in deep
Life changing - but not a time to weep.
Loss- loss of you, disappeared for ever
You - my light, my love, you so clever
Loss of you, no way back - grief so deep
A time of desperation, a time to weep.
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Author:
sue.evans (
Offline) - Published: January 21st, 2018 08:52
- Comment from author about the poem: Just playing with different levels if meaning for the word loss in light of a friend’s recent loss.
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Comments3
Very touching.... dismisses all the minor things we stress over in life and then cuts to the chase.
👍😊
Sensitive write Sue.
Thank you
Great poem, Sue! Time can be made up, money can be made again, but love.....?
Thank you 😊
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