Dreams

Naeners

The way my mind soars at night

 

Dreams bringing me to life

 

Don't wake me up

 

I'm doing fine

 

My sleep gets everything off my mind

 

Why live real life when I could be

 

Flying high

 

Being free

 

The world can only tear me down

 

It makes me feel like such a clown

 

So in my dream land I will stay

 

The real worlds nightmares far away

 

Cause I'm so sick of hopeless crying

 

So I'm just going to stop trying

  • Author: Naeners (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 21st, 2018 12:10
  • Comment from author about the poem: Please tell me what you think. Constructive criticism is always welcomed.
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  • Caring dove

    hello .. i like the way you have worded this piece, i like the way you speak of life making you feel like a clown and i like the rhyming throughout this ... sadly for some dreams , if they are '' good '' dreams lol they are our only escape from the cruel reality in which we live , either that or '' day - dreaming '' or escapism into films books etc.. you make dreams sound dreamy with the whole reference to being far away , i like it



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