faizariaz21

Faded

it's just something i feel

it feels like suffocating

it feels like failure

like guilt

then it stops

then it comes back

my heart starts to ache

my mind starts to throb

i cant do anything anymore

im faded

Comments2

  • Lorna

    Very good how your poem fades and builds physically to mirror your message!

  • Jo Middleton

    I like the structure, for me it's quite symbolic. I also related to this way too easy.
    Overall nice work :)



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