it's just something i feel
it feels like suffocating
it feels like failure
like guilt
then it stops
then it comes back
my heart starts to ache
my mind starts to throb
i cant do anything anymore
im faded
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Author:
faizariaz21 (
Offline) - Published: January 22nd, 2018 00:18
- Comment from author about the poem: my feelings
- Category: Sad
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Comments2
Very good how your poem fades and builds physically to mirror your message!
I like the structure, for me it's quite symbolic. I also related to this way too easy.
Overall nice work 🙂
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