Faded

faizariaz21

it's just something i feel

it feels like suffocating

it feels like failure

like guilt

then it stops

then it comes back

my heart starts to ache

my mind starts to throb

i cant do anything anymore

im faded

  • Author: faizariaz21 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 22nd, 2018 00:18
  • Comment from author about the poem: my feelings
  • Category: Sad
  • Views: 19
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Comments2

  • Lorna

    Very good how your poem fades and builds physically to mirror your message!

  • Jo Middleton

    I like the structure, for me it's quite symbolic. I also related to this way too easy.
    Overall nice work 🙂



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