When love ends it some say it loses its definition
To love something is to truly love something
Never wanting to leave what you have
Never wanting what you lean on to fall
But what if someday it falls
Even know they fell and wont ever get back up
You will fall with them
For you have fell for them once, and it was easy to get back up
But this time it is different
You fell back instead of forward
You lost what you loved and the pain is unbearable
But you use it to make mends with whatever may have happened
It will eat at you, like limbless soul in a lake full of piranha's
That is part of it, its part of loss, part of pain
We are not human if we do not feel these things
Because love is not easy
It is unorthodox, unexplained, sometimes unnoticed
But if the love you have is real, then you will know
I knew, I gave her everything, unconditionally loved her
But she is gone now, that is just with my eyes
With my heart she is still sitting across the counter from me
She is still telling me about her drama and her problems
She is still replaying in my mind like a broken record
Some say that is a broken heart
But i believe that that is someone who knows the definition of love
To never leave
To always catch yourself when you fall
Always be there for the one you love
And we are so small, but we are so powerful
The love we give is so powerful that when what we love is gone
We continue on with what we had and we build on
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Author:
Jay123 (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Just some thoughts ive been having after i lost her...
- Category: Love
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some very strong messages in this poem .. i love how you have spoken of her replaying in your mind like a broken record, even tho she is gone from your eyes, she is still there in your mind and she has never truly left you , not in your mind , not in your heart. i love this , such a lovely feel to this piece , you have worded this very nicely , i enjoyed
'' to always catch yourself when you fall '' you fell but you kept the memories of her in your mind, which stops you from falling even further? surely if we had loved and for some reason we closed off our mind to them , or tried to .. then that would hurt more , you got me thinking
Thank you! I appreciate the kind words.
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