Empty Now

Naeners

Everything feels

Empty now

In my heart

It's empty now

And in my mind

I'm empty now

Every smile

Is empty now

Just look at me

So empty now

Because this world

Feels empty now

So empty now

Too empty now

  • Author: Naeners (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 24th, 2018 02:00
  • Comment from author about the poem: Please tell me what you think. Constructive criticism is always welcomed.
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Caring dove

    emptiness is not nice .. i like your repetition of the word empty and i like the flow to this piece, take a look at my poem '' the empty well '' its a feeling im used to

  • Caring dove

    despite it being around '' emptiness '' it has a nice flow and a nice beat to this , when i read it along it sounds kind of a bit song like . .unless this is just how i am reading it .. i think , maybe if you add a few extra lines or added words or more description to how your heart feels,but its short and sweet and you convery how empty yuo feel



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