To the one I took for granted,
"I love you more than all the words in all the books." -Malayzia E.
You give me every reason to want to be a better me. You give me everything with only giving me so much. You brought the brightest light to my life and I......
Took the one that I love for granted.
I didn't believe that your love was as real as you made it seem..I mean how are we two magnets, thousands of miles apart, and still stuck together? How could I be the one for you and physically we're not even together. Why are you so in love with me.
Why are you still in love with me and I took you for granted.
This love that we have is the greatest fairytale ive ever seen but it's a real life story and thats where I messed it up.
I broke your heart in reality, I cant just wake up in a cold sweat yet relieved because I only had a dream that I took the one that I love for granted.
But I am sorry... because it wasn't a dream, it was as real as this heartache.
To the one I took for granted,
I know I crossed the line, I know I am making you cry, I know I took your heart, I know I wasted 5 months of your time just to do some bullshit because I couldn't tell you that everything wasn't fine.
"Communication is key"
well I think we lost it, because for some reason something is off and you can't get in and I can't get out. Not that the key can't be found because we know what we have to do, it is a two person effort if we do wanna push through.
To the one I took for granted
You are my first love, You are my lifeline, You are the most beautiful and wonderful love ive ever had. I wish I could take it all back and now im so sad that i hurt you so bad.
I know there are areas that I lacked in but just bare with me because I know I can be a better me. I know I can steal your heart again and be the one you and I both want me to be.
To the one I took for Granted,
Malazyia I would never take you for granted again.
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Author:
DezareeCheyd (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I hurt somebody that loves me more than anything.... I had a doubt that our fairytale relationship was exactly how I said it, a fairytale, but it was as real as it gets. You dont find real love that last nowadays but I did. And I couldn't even believe it. Now im fighting to keep the one I love and to you I am so sorry that I hurt you... this poem is also a response to the one i took for granted, heres the link to her poem.... shes a phenomenal writer. Go look https://mypoeticside.com/user-15104
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hello dezaree, i can feel your regrets and your hurt thoughout this writing , i truly love how you have spoken of yourself and her as magnets thousand of miles apart and yet still stuck together , i like the contrast here. i like how you have said , she can't get in , you can't get out, almost like you are both somehow stuck apart even tho you feel you are both meant to be together. i love the relation to fairytale . great piece of writing , enjoyed reading this
I really appreciate it. I don't write poety often but this was necessary
Great refrain
Thank you
Beautiful choice of words🥀
As well as yours babygirl
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