When I saw her walking down the aisle
I knew she was an angel in disguise
She held onto her father’s arm tightly
While walking down the aisle gracefully
Her father gave me her arm and said
Take care of my little redhead
She looked into my eyes and smiled
Suddenly my whole world beguiled
We said our vows and exchanged our rings
That little small thing that will tie our fate strings
And when it is time to say I do
I told her I’m lucky to have you
I guess fate has its own way
Because she is the reason for me to stay
Maybe I haven’t won the game of life
But I’ve sure as hell won an amazing wife
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Author:
ronyswizzle (
Offline) - Published: January 29th, 2018 10:14
- Comment from author about the poem: So I wrote this poem for one of my books and I want your opinion on it btw I'm a girl :D
- Category: Love
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Comments1
For having what I'd say is a really strong beginning and overall content, the last two lines feel more cheesy than the rest. That being said though, this is my favorite I've read in a little while, and it is extremely tender and it does use great language. I really enjoyed your poem. You're talented.
Thank you 🙂
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