Pain or Feeling

Little_Write

It's a pain or a feeling i just can't explain.

It only happens when I'm with you.

It makes me fall to the floor,

This feeling i just can't ignore.

 

People call them butterflies,

I tell them that it's a lie,

Because butterflies are beautiful and angelic,

And this feeling tears my insides.

 

This pain or feeling comes from you,

When you smile it rips me apart even more,

Some say this is what love feels like,

But does love really hurt this much?

 

Maybe i should tell you what you do to me,

But if i do does that mean you'll stay with me,

Cause right now I'm watching you with her and this pain hurts more.

You look at her the way i look at you.

 

It makes me wander,

Do you get this pain or feeling when she smiles at you?

If you do is that because you love her?

Or is it the butterflies giving you that feeling?

 

Maybe one day this pain or feeling will fade,

But i hope it doesn't because i hope one day you'll see me the way i see you,

Maybe one day I'll be the reason you have this pain or feeling.

But for now ill just deal with this pain or feeling tearing my insides...

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Comments4

  • Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose)

    hello little write , i love this ! 🙂 i can imagine loving someone who you feel does not love you , that can be painful.. this was well expressed , sometimes we can get confused with how we are feeling and i love how you are questioning that feeling in your stomach... you know butterflies would never make you fall to the floor, they would make you fly lol great piece of writing

  • Lorna

    I like how you turned "pain or feeling" into one word!

  • dusk arising

    Oh the dilemma so often penned beautifully expressed here. We've all done it, fallen for our best friends lover or similar. A very difficult situation which, if you act upon your feelings, can get very complicated or even nasty.
    Best advice is to put yourself in other places and occupy yourself with anything that stops you having to observe their love or even their company. Time changes everything.
    Very good emotional writing straight from your heart and drew me right into your plight.

  • Tony36

    Well written and expressed



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