I can't find will.. No fuel in the tank
Even lost mo and Jo in the flow
No need to panic nothing ever goes far
As captain I know when to go overboard
I'll find an island let my energy return
Greatful to those closest who wait while I'm a ghost in a shell
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Author:
Poetic Dan (
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Comments4
Awesome write, Dan!
Love the visual...
it’s like I’m looking in
my mirror!!
So relatable!
Yes, we can get lost
in the flow my dear
captain...but we’re
strong enough to let
that ship sail home again!
~Laura~
Yep, I'm fully recovered and happily sailing.
Thank you so much and happy travels 😉
"Even lost mo and jo in the flow"
Such a great line
Appreciated my friend
A six line admission of what being a fallible human being is all about.
Compact and punchy excellence.
You know i'm a great fan of 'less is more'
Absolutely my friend. Love the comment, thank you
Perfect picture for a perfect poem!
Got past that crappie moment. Thank you buddy
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