I'm getting There

Discreation

This is the first time in a long time that I've wrote
There's just been a hole in the boat

All my thoughts just leave me to drown in my sorrow
And one day there won't be a tomorrow

There's new people on this amazing site
I wouldn't of known if I stepped into the light

You're all great poets as I can see
Way better than even me

My thoughts are nothing when it's clouded by darkness
My thoughts disappear and I deeply miss

I have nothing that intrigues me to write
Nothing that frees my sight

I honestly have no idea what to do
I ask myself who am I, yes who..

It's been months since I've wrote a poem
My creativity has just decided to rome

I know this isn't great and you all will judge
Though I don't care, right now I just need a nudge

Some will say while others hide behind their screens
And not people who just are gonna be mean

Well here you go damage I tried my best
Now maybe I'm done having a rest

I'll try to write everyday
Whatever it may

But even if it's not perfect, it is my own work of art​
That came deep within my heart

Don't listen to what others criticize
Because they're just speaking lies

Every poet starts out small
They just learned how to crawl

You will grow and learn
But don't let words burn

You are amazing in your own way
So say whatever you want to say

 

 

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Comments2

  • orchidee

    A fine write D. C'mon now, 'Way better than even me'? You mean, there's people that sing better than me?! In that case, it's everyone!(heehee).

  • Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose)

    well i enjoyed reading this , so you can't be that bad at writing lol 🙂 you expressed yourself well , so well done . i'm not sure one poet should compare themselves to another as we are all different on here! so you feel one writer has more talent then you .. how do you know how long they have been writing for , maybe you could become better, not that i am saying you are bad at what you do , infact i like your writings.. but all poets start somewhere , i remember the first poem i ever wrote , compared to how i write now , i would say it was rubbish but then again i am comparing my past work to my current work , different places in time .. keep writing , keep sharing , who knows what you can acheive



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