Beneath a crack of thunder
and fork of light an uneasy
feeling lurks this night
conjured up ensuing
relinquish this calm repose
resurrect the dammed this
tempest beast hails the
culprit from the void
thither come hider
consider the flames
the ivory tower hides
secrets with names
high in a castle tower
standing free in the night
the lighting flashes reflecting
his perilous mood his blood
sings with the rolling thunder
as he whistles a reckless tune
bilious dark clouds turn into
ebony horses leaving the sky
and touching down on
the rain soaked ground
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it's rare a cracker turns up like this. it actually caught me off guard of how beautiful each word is. a brilliant piece of writing.
HI kevin thanks for the read and great comment think Candlewitch gave the best lines
lol, but I am glad we did it ,,,zigs
Awesome mood evoked. Please continue the story. This character is frightening and intriguing.
Hi thanks hood and Candlewitch introduced me to the darker themes
just trying to keep up with them both lol,,,,,cheers ,,,,zigs
never though of continuing the story will give it some thought ,,,thanks
because you asked myself and Candlewitch have come up with a part two of this one will post maybe Friday thanks for asking it was fun ,,,regards ,,,,zigs
Wow! So dramatic and realistically eerie!
Reading the words gave me the sensation that I was watching an HD t.v. screen production! My heart was racing! An awesome collaborative piece! It deserves to be revisited more than once! Going right into my favorites!
~Laura~
Laura hello there thanks for such an amazing comment I am sure Candlewitch will also
be happy to know a piece may get another read that is so great to know cheers for
that ,,,zigs
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