Such Venom and Ill will doesn’t befit you.
That’s not who you are!
Tartness and Ruthlessness doesn’t become you.
There is no need to be Injurious and Obnoxious!
Indulging in malicious gossip is Loathsome!
This is not who you are!
So...
Why such cruelty?
Why such viciousness?
Why such malevolence toward your fellow woman ?
You are you and I am me.
You have your opinion and I have mine.
Let’s be kind enough to be willing to agree on disagreeing!
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You said it, Laura. Don't know if this is aimed at anyone in particular, but no matter, we should all agree to disagree!
Fred,
Your visit and comments are always welcomed and appreciated!
Thank you!
~Laura~
Well written and expressed
Tony,
Thank you for the read
and comment! Very
much appreciated!
~Laura~
Welcome
Your visit my dear
šLauren š is very much appreciated! Iām so glad you love the write. Many thanks for complimenting and saving it into your favorites!
I donāt write a lot...but when I do, it is because Iām stoked to do so!
~Laura~
no room for a!! holes on a poetry site
I totally agree with you, Ron! Thank you!!!!!!
I really appreciate your visit and comment!
~Laura~
my pleasure
Thank you Laura.
What a wonderful poem and you have certainly touched upon one of the downfall's of man.
Keep writing
FineB
Youāre welcome, FineB!
Your read and comment
is very much appreciated!
~Laura~
hi there ok then so this is directed to a certain person which is something I have done on another site which is ok by me as you do it with poetic ways not another my fav lines are these for me ''There is no need to be Ā InjuriousĀ andĀ Obnoxious!
Indulging in malicious gossip isĀ Loathsome'', good words you pin together there to make your point ,,,zigs
Zigs,
Thank you for the read,
comment and saving it
into your favorites!
Yes, Iām especially proud
of those lines too. There IS a reason for the deliberate choice of font and position of certain words.
It most certainly was to make a point and to emphasize the message!
Regards...
~Laura~
Nice āacrostic likeā āVITRIOLā interspersed throughout your your write. Good work Laura.
Thank you Gary!
hi laura, sometimes we get so wound up with peoples ways , and people can certainly frustrate and upset us. i like how you ask questions , questioning why the need for their behaviour. why is a good question , and there never seems to be a good enough answer , these people just seem to be this way , for some reason
i love these ending lines, you make a very good point
You are you and I am me.
You have your opinion and I have mine.
Letās be human enough who will agree to disagree!
great piece of writing laura ..!
Good vibe may it reflect on us all
Thank you, my friend!
Good read Laura š
Go girl.. I got ya back.. some things just have to be said.. dont they just... said well in my book Neville
Neville,
Thank you for reading and commenting! Very much appreciated!...and many thanks for having my back!
~Laura~
pleasure's mine
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