kevin browne

Help Me Please.

I washed away my tears only because I knew
There was no chance, nothing new
Under lovers doorstep straight off from the start
I placed her there alongside my lonesome heart
I looked for loves basket as I fell to my knees
Oh, good Lord, won't you help me, help me, please
I lost her and won her when I remembered how
To kiss her right here and right now
The dining the dinner the dishes and wishes
None any better than her kisses
The sun the sky the moon the stars
Neptune is too far from mars
I look through my telescope so I could see
But she doesn't need a telescope to love me.

Comments4

  • yellowrose

    this is very sweet and lovely .. i especially love the ending :-)

    • kevin browne

      well, I guess then this then could have been written for you. thanks for popping in again. always good to hear from you.

    • Diamond

      Great write and a tricky ending.

      • kevin browne

        thanks for your comment, Diamond.

      • Accidental Poet

        A beautiful write Kevin.

        • kevin browne

          thanks, AP, good to hear from you.

        • Jo Middleton

          This was such a sweet and beautiful read.. amazing work!

          • kevin browne

            that's very sweet, thank you for reading and leaving a lovely comment like that.

            • Jo Middleton

              No problem, it is just the truth



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