Twilight,
Day surrendering
Light into
Submission,
Taking a knee
Before the night,
Entrusting its
Future
To a darkness
Unknown,
Waiting in the cold
—for dawn to return
(Villanova Pennsylvania: February, 2018)
- Author: Kurt Philip Behm ( Offline)
- Published: February 6th, 2018 11:30
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 36
Comments1
Beautifully written, Kurt, love your word choices and combinations like 'taking a knee before the night' sounds nearly like a marriage proposal! Or 'day surrendering light into submission', a subtle, yet forceful way of describing the onset of night. What can I say, you are good!
Perceptive as always.
Thanks Fred.
Kurt
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