Our love; unveiled when dating in the dark.
We knew this way of searching was a chance;
but soon our eyes were fluttering a spark,
which spun unto a wonderful romance.
Our day has come to tie our sacred knot
The strings we’ve laced to bind our hearts as one.
What lies within our pasts are now forgot;
for now we look for better things to come.
Our love is blessed with bands of golden rings;
We breathed from lips our vows of solemn words
We’ll keep each other safe beneath our wings
and will enjoy our lives as free as birds
We may have borrowed; something old and blue;
But cherish life; in love of pastures new
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Author:
Poetic25 (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: February 7th, 2018 11:29
- Comment from author about the poem: Written for a good friend, for his best mans speech
- Category: Love
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Comments2
A remarkable sonnet to read as best man at a friend's wedding - a first rate piece of writing.
Thank you Fay,
It was a challenge, but enjoyable.
Michael 🙂
Well done !! I do like the rhythm it does flow well
Thank you hulheart for reading, and your comments
Michael 🙂
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