The thunderous storm quells
as the beast stands to his feet
mounting his steed with flames
in his eyes seeks vengeance
in the field of screams
He has returned from the void
on a streak of forked lightening
conjured by disdain consumed
by death and pain this ivory
tower holds the echoes of his
birth cries but he still holds
secrets and names
in this night that lasts forever
repeating itself in time
the storm of madness continues
with little known reasons or rhyme
his birth was a monstrous cruelty
it was at that moment he was chosen
by all the devils of hell
who tortured and made frozen
his young heart under a spell
to take to his grave to yearn to save
lost to him all the secrets and names
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Great write
hi many thanks for the read and comment its a part two part one is on my list ,,,regards ,,,zigs
Welcome
Ziggy and Cat,
Well done!
I Truly enjoyed this part 2 co-write! Totally engaging! The imagery this co-write conjures up is astounding! Would love to see a part 3. Is there a possibility?
~Laura ~
Hi so glad you enjoyed this part two I can't really expect Candlewitch to engage in a part 3 I am up for it but you need to ask her ok lol, we wrote both parts with one email from me one back job done
she is so easy to write with she is such an amazing talent I don't really want to ask her as I did ask her for this and so glad she did ,,,regards ,,,zigs
I will definitely reach out to her! She is an amazing writer!
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