Did I do this
Did I do that
When in the cafe
We both sat
I didn't smile
I smiled too much
Looked serious
Seemed too stuck up
Too anxious
For your company
Or too much talking
About me
I laughed out loud
Was that too much
No gravitas
Perhaps in such
You wish me ill
You wish me well
In truth I honestly
Can't tell
It's easier by far I feel
To stay at home and cook a meal
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Great poem Lorna. Just be yourself, judging from the way you write, you are one heck of a lady and don't need to worry about anything you do. If he does not like it....his loss!
It's not "him" - It's "everyone"! ha ha. I do try to laugh at myself - this is definitely regressive behavior! Should add that I was with the man I chose because it didn't matter to him what I did! Bridget Jones: I like you just the way you are!
Either way, a great poem Lorna.
Great poet Lorna!!
Good morning (or your evening?) - thank you!
Good morning dear!....Yes . Here now it is an ..evening time.
The setting Indian sun...........
Yaa
A great write, Lorna!
I can relate to what
you wrote! Wondering
and questioning myself...
...many years ago. No longer necessary...I’m glad to say! Enjoyed the read! Enjoy your day!
~Laura~
You too Laura.......
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