LittleGift

Make Each Moment Count

Moments build into memories encapsulated in time

Always forming and shaping our heart and our mind

Keeping us warm as we journey back

Eyes are our witness to life’s good and bad

 

Let go the anger which can twist your insides

Open your heart to life’s wondrous surprise

Vast is your knowledge as you become wise

Every moment you live is a moment to shine

Comments11

  • Burning Crow

    Hi LG, really enjoyed this, I like the picture you chose as well, "Let go of the anger which can twist your insides" is a great line, Each line spelling out make love was Really clever as well. Great writing.

    • LittleGift

      Thanks Burning Crow for the lovely comment. So glad you liked it

      LG

    • yellowrose

      hi penny , i love this tho for some reason this one makes me want to cry .. says more about me and my life tho , then your poem lol,

      this line really made me think

      Keeping us warm as we journey back

      more about my own life, to be honest with you , and how when i look back , all i seem to feel is upset and all i can seem to see is too much pain ..

      your poem was lovely tho , just a shame some of us dont have too many '' warm '' memories.. xx

      • LittleGift

        Writing myself a message here really Charlotte. Telling myself what I already know I need to do. Let go and love myself more

        Can be easier said than done

        Hugs to you Charlotte ❤️

      • Accidental Poet

        Now this is a awesome write LG. Really made me smile.

        • LittleGift

          Aw AP I am so pleased I popped a smile on your face today 😊

          LG

          • Accidental Poet

            And I'm so glad I read your poem today.

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          • FineB

            Thank you Little Gift.

            An excellent write.

            As one gets older every living moment of your life should be treasured.

            Keep writing
            FineB

            • LittleGift

              Absolutely FineB and thanks for your lovely comment and for reading

              LG 😊

            • BRIAN & ANGELA

              EXCELLENT ACROSTIC HONEY ! Loved both the STRUCTURE & SUBJECT of your POEM ~ Today my poem is also about the best use of time ~ Yours BRIAN

              • LittleGift

                Aw we were on the same wavelength today Brian 😊 I will pop over and read your no doubt lovely piece. Thanks for reading and for your lovely comment

                LG

              • Laura

                LG,
                A beautiful acrostic poem!
                You have shared a beautiful
                message! Words well chosen to convey your message...especially, “Eyes are our witness to life’s good and bad”...
                If we can discern between the two, we can make a difference!

                ~Laura~

                • LittleGift

                  Hello Laura 😊 thanks so much for reading and your lovely comment. Yes life would be such a better place if we could. So glad you liked it. That line changed twice before I settled on that one lol

                  LG x

                  • Laura

                    A fine choice of words!

                    ...and you’re welcome!❤️

                  • Diamond

                    The MOMENT alone.

                  • Diamond

                    I am that MOMENT.

                    • LittleGift

                      Aw Diamond big hugs x

                    • Poetic25

                      LG,
                      This is a wonderful and beautiful acrostic style, capturing so much thought and emotion
                      Brilliant

                      M :)x

                      • LittleGift

                        Thank you M :)
                        I was feeling inspired

                        LG x

                      • FredPeyer

                        This poem is so good, I had to make it a favorite!
                        I am also going to print it out and hang it on the wall in my office. I do want to read it over and over again. All the lines are good, but I really love that second stanza. Am not so sure though about 'becoming wise'.

                        • LittleGift

                          Fred I am delighted you love this to the point you want to print it out and hang it in your office. I don’t think a compliment can get much better than that. I am thrilled you love it and thanks so much for reading my poem

                          Have a very HAPPY Sunday

                          LG 😊 x

                        • Scrambled Letters

                          Beautiful words to live by

                          • LittleGift

                            Thank you SL 😊



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