Always trying to learn more

Poetic Dan

Although I knew this week would go fast
I'm never ready for the ship to depart

Words and emotions will never tell enough
To wake every morning for a smile and hug

I try so hard to keep it with me everyday
This love you supply in your own special ways

Now I see why one can't just walk away when you leave
As I stand and watch wishing it never had to be

This is the path that life gave to me
Trying to learn what you know already.

  • Author: Poetic Dan (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 18th, 2018 06:57
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Lorna

    Very sad one......

    • Poetic Dan

      Thank you, it's was felt and acknowledged now I'm slowly returning to balance (I think)

    • poetboy123

      They say happiness is fleeting, but so is misery. I know you can push past whatever's in your way my friend, wonderful write!

      • Poetic Dan

        Perfectly said my friend and I'm already feeling more clarity for releasing these emotions.

      • Laura🌻

        Dan,
        I totally agree with
        poetboy5454.
        Continue releasing
        those emotions and
        that clarity will be more
        evident with each passing
        day! A beautiful write!
        Love the last two lines!

        ~Laura~

        • Poetic Dan

          Thank you, it is a new day and I'm feeling goood 😉

        • FredPeyer

          Agree with poetboy5454! Your writing is getting better and better as well!

          • Poetic Dan

            Cheers buddy forever trying to be more than yesterday 😉



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