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Its Raskolnikov

Steaming along in an ocean liner,
Trying to please the world around,
Make myself seem finer and finer,
So I don't hit the ground,

Gotta find the life inside,
Create a world for just her and I,
Try to make myself good enough,
She deserves the best,
I have to pass the test!

Feeling like I have to fight to keep it on the inside,
Gotta find myself a pride,
Gotta find a place to hide,
Redefine high and reach the sky,
Is it good enough if I really, really try?

Positively I have to fly,
Have to make myself finer,
Have to live through another day,
Pressured to make myself diviner,
I have to be the best,
Have to accomplish so much before I run out of numbers on the timer!
I have to be the best rhymer,

Make myself a place to keep it all,
Up the wall, god, it's so tall,
Forsake my case so they're not quite so crappy,
Fake a face to make them happy,
Can't say what's on the inside,
You know I've tried,
But you've acted like I should hide,
So here goes everything I'm giving it my all,
I hope that I don't fall,

Someone tell me why,
Give me a reason because I don't want to die,
Please don't be afraid to pry,
Someone please try,
I don't wanna die,

  • Author: Raskolnikov (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 18th, 2018 20:28
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 17
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Comments2

  • FredPeyer

    You're not gonna die, your writing makes you immortal!

  • Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose)

    great piece of writing !! 🙂 a great flow and beat to this one .. well done

    • Its Raskolnikov

      Oops, missed this, sorry! Thank you though, the words are much appreciated.



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