Poetic25

'Myth upon the wold' (Sonnet)

 

I close my eyes to paint a pictured scene
a view; unfurls and takes my breath a-way
and then my thoughts veer off unto a dream
A crystal world that’s carved in full array.
Where colours shape into a twinkled mould.
Across this place; there lies a glistened hue;
a stream runs through a gorge of Healers gold;
which lays beneath a diamond studded dew.
A water-hole is made from Moonstone shells
here angels rest and cleanse their soiled wings
and fairies come to dance around their wells.
Where giants roam and keep away the sins.
My vision of this moor begins to fold
But nice to share my ‘Myth-upon-the-wold’

Comments6

  • Jamie

    Magical!

    • Poetic25

      Thank you Jaime and for reading

      Michael :)

    • yellowrose

      lovely :-) its like a fantasy world.. quite beautiful :-)

      • Poetic25

        Thank you yellowrose, it is indeed a fantasy

        Michael :)

      • Christina8

        A beautiful daydream!. Like Jamie said, "magical", because indeed it sounds so. Great job! Christina

        • Poetic25

          Thank you Christina for your lovely words and reading
          Michael :)

        • Lorna

          You shared it so beautifully I would love to visit it!

          • Poetic25

            Thank you Lorna, well who knows with 'dreams' :)
            Michael

          • LittleGift

            Oh wow M what a beautiful daydream. Magical and wonderous. A fine write 😊 x

            • Poetic25

              Thank you LG

              Don't know where my mind was off to haha

              M:)x

            • poelove

              well done -vivid a joy to read

              • Poetic25

                Thank you poelove and for reading

                Michael :)

                • poelove

                  you are very welcome,



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