Waiting on times intervention

Poetic Dan

Nothing can prepare you when worlds drift apart
At all thoses beautiful moments we shared pure light are now only faint little flickers in the dark

For this is never made easy once sharing the responsibility of our young
As all within the family grow so did our minds and souls
It reaches a point where both can't be free
The moment comes to do what's best for the whole tree
To be all we can, with our ability to respond and nerture what we see

This is my goal to pass down what I know, not building my wealth or how many trips I've flown. Not my style of clothes or transport of choice but my ability to be open with lifes forever changing corse

For the worst thing I've found from when these world part, is the ones that get in between trying to fix what is only waiting for time to intervene.

  • Author: Poetic Dan (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 1st, 2018 03:54
  • Comment from author about the poem: 6 years after my 12 year marriage ended we are still struggling to see things for the others point of view.
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • User favorite of this poem: Laura🌻.
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  • Laura🌻

    Dan,
    This is a great write!
    “The moment comes to do what’s best for the whole tree
    To be all we can, with our ability to respond and nurture what we see”

    So wise and perceptive of you in recognizing the needs of the whole and not just the one!
    I thoroughly enjoyed the read! I applaud you for sharing this beautiful and meaningful message!

    ~Laura~

    • Poetic Dan

      Thank you I'm trying to turn this inner negativity to positive.

      • Laura🌻

        The power is within you to expulse the negative,
        my friend!



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