thatsilentgirl

You Were Never Mine

The right place,

The wrong time,

The right rhyme,

The wrong line,

The right book,

The wrong bind,

The right gesture,

The wrong sign,

And a piece of you

That was never mine...

Comments3

  • Bookworm

    Wow! This is a great poem. I love that it is short and it is general. It doesn't get too specific and that enables the reader to apply it to their life. It's really beautiful and I really enjoyed.

    • thatsilentgirl

      Thanks. I tried to make it applicable to anyone

    • A. F. Naturaliy

      Amazing poem! I love how short and simple it is, but also how vague it can be.

    • Lorna

      A hard lesson to accept and so well captured.........

      • thatsilentgirl

        Thank you:)

        • Lorna

          It reminds me of this: http://www.davidpbrown.co.uk/poetry/kurt-luedtke.html - read here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=j91DsC7XvdQ

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