The scars upon my body. the scars that show I'm weak
They take away the strength in me, the breath that I don't breathe
Although you say I'm worthy, I see the lies behind your eyes
Although you say I'm strong, I know I won't be here long
As each step I take upon this Earth just seems to hurt and hurt
And I can't bare to walk this Earth
I wish to be beneath it
In the darkness
In the dirt
- Finley Fire
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Author:
Finley Fire (
Offline) - Published: March 5th, 2018 12:14
- Category: Sad
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Comments3
Wow! Your poem is very deep. If it reflects your personal life, know that it gets brighter after the dark. I salute your words!
It does reflect my life but I'm working through it to get to that brighter future. Thank you for the comment.
i like how you have layed this poem out , and i also like the words used throughout this . a good poem 🙂
Thank you for the comment, it's the first poem I've ever put out to others so it means a lot that you like it.
Really like your poems.
I suffer from clinical depression, something I would never tell a soul years ago.
I know the darkness you speak of .
I'll be honest, at least this is how it goes for me.
I'm in the darkness way more than the light.
However, I think I appreciate and enjoy the brighter times more than a lot of other poeple.
Hang in there!
Yes I understand that and thank you for reading my poems. I hope you see some more brightness soon.
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