LittleGift

A Love Not Found

She was all he wanted

He was all she desired

She was close to tears

He was feeling tired

She would search on high

He would say goodbye

She with open heart

He felt himself depart

She lived in hope they’d kiss

For him the chance had missed

She searched each day the crowds

His body lay in the ground

She hoped to soon lock eyes

He was watching from the skies

She dreamed of holding hands

He became more of the lands

She cried for a love not known

He had wilted down to bone

She felt he did exist

He was now in natures kiss

She wished to find the one

He knew that chance had gone

Comments10

  • Scrambled Letters

    A beautiful poem and you were destined to be together ๐Ÿ™‚

  • Michael Edwards

    Beautiful and I love the structure of it

    • LittleGift

      Thanks so much Michael, so glad you liked my piece. Thanks for reading :)

    • Lorna

      The one who stays behind has the hardest time ...........

      • LittleGift

        โค๏ธ so true lovely x

      • Fay Slimm

        A agree with Lorna - the picture you built here of the one left behind is so touchingly real.







































































































































        • LittleGift

          Thank you Fay, so glad you liked it and yes Lorna is right it is so tragic for the one left behind searching. Thanks for reading x

        • Laura

          LG,
          A beautifully written poem!
          One of my favorite lines...
          โ€œHe was now in natures kissโ€...
          A great visual to enhance your beautiful words!

          Hugs ๐Ÿค—
          ~Laura~

          • LittleGift

            Thanks Laura and thanks for the save. So glad you liked it ๐Ÿ˜Š

            Big Hugs xx
            LG

          • Poetic25

            LG
            Such a heart-felt piece, with your emotions running strong here. Really well penned.
            M :)x

            • LittleGift

              Thanks M,
              I think I have learnt to value love more than ever now. Some never get love. I was lucky, it is a true treasure when found

              LG :) x

            • Christina8

              Beautiful poem, so sad. Yet happy that you found each other!

              • LittleGift

                Thanks Christina, yes absolutely chuffed we did ๐Ÿ˜Š thanks for reading x

              • LittleRedPoet

                I loved this poem!

                • LittleGift

                  Thanks so much for reading and leaving a comment, so glad you liked it ๐Ÿ˜Š

                • Dysthymia

                  Youโ€™re really good at writing! I love your style. Keep it up and keep writing!

                  • LittleGift

                    Thanks ever so much for the lovely comment and for reading and saving x

                  • Maxine Smith

                    Another touching write, your writing is always so moving, you really reach out and pull me in.
                    Love the structure, the flow and of course the story, which is painful but beautifully written.



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