Malsvir

Traped

Burn myself today 

To see if I still feel 

I wish to see the day

I finally feel real

I've been through every way

But they all end up the same

And  there's no one left to blame 

 

Comments2

  • LAWLIET

    I like this

  • Cynthia

    I feel some emotion but(and this is just a polite and nice tip hope i dont offend you) i think it you look deeper inside you and search for the deepest feelings and you let them write themselves down then you'll find it hard to stop writing. again just a tip or suggestion but yea i think this poem was good 🙂



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