Burn myself today
To see if I still feel
I wish to see the day
I finally feel real
I've been through every way
But they all end up the same
And there's no one left to blame
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Author:
Malsvir (
Offline) - Published: March 10th, 2018 13:55
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Comments2
I like this
I feel some emotion but(and this is just a polite and nice tip hope i dont offend you) i think it you look deeper inside you and search for the deepest feelings and you let them write themselves down then you'll find it hard to stop writing. again just a tip or suggestion but yea i think this poem was good 🙂
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