when we first met
I craved to find away to
You
I needed you for my soul
Consumption
I needed you touch my mind
An give me hope
That life would be better then
Where I was,
I never knew I could love
Someone
Like I love you
You gave me worth but that can be a double
Edge sword
I gave life to our little world
I hang on the edge of hope
That the dream I have
Won't get lost in our fights
The love i have for the man
Is threaded in my soul
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Yes its dangerous to give your heart away! Have to keep part of ourselves so we don't get lost!
Yup it sure is
A revealing look at a true heart
Beautifully written
Thanks
that was well written.
Hmm. I like it, well written.
Thank you I appreciate it means a lot
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