Charred black and ash grey
best describe her mood today
She's on fire!
So I'll shut my mouth,
throw away the key
and savor the taste
of humility
Perfect rhyming in this engaging verse Jamie - - it has to be one of your best. Great read.
Thanks Fay!
Wow! A very POWERFUL write, Jaime! I enjoyed the read... and will heed the message! ~Laura~
Thank you Laura, but don’t worry you’re safe, I’m the target.
And how! Thanks D!
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Perfect rhyming in this engaging verse Jamie - - it has to be one of your best. Great read.
Thanks Fay!
Wow!
A very POWERFUL write, Jaime!
I enjoyed the read...
and will heed the
message!
~Laura~
Thank you Laura, but don’t worry you’re safe, I’m the target.
And how! Thanks D!
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