I sit and play" you are my sunshine" on the violin
The emotions crash through my soul like waves on the beach
As I see them in my arms once more then gone in a silent beat
Truly blessed that they are alive but doomed to be on the side line
To write with love of the moments gone by
Forever learning how to keep my own light burning bright
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Poetic Dan (
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That happens doesn't it - when sometimes emotions just seem to disappear or just get shunted aside because we have other people and things that need us........the last stanza is beautiful....
Yeah I was just going to keep that by it self but it was sadness that got me there.
Thanks for listening
Very relatable, Dan!
I’ve shed many tears
while listening to...
“you are my sunshine “!
It finally peeked...
and now it’s finally there!
Continue to keep your own
“light burning bright”!
The sunshine will be there
for you!
Your write is a bit sad, but
hopeful! There are many
rays of sunshine waiting
for you!
~Laura~
Gosh, I feel very grateful for the compassion today. Even when we feel alone we never truly are thank you for your positive vibe
You’re very welcome!
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That is the beauty of this
site...for the most part!
We don’t know each other
visually, but we do know
one another through our
work! We are an eclectic
group from all parts of
the world! Most interesting!
I love the equilibrium in this, good piece indeed
Thank you my friend, the search goes on to find that myself.
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