Depleted

Syd

I played with words 

Adjectives, nouns and verbs 

Subjects covered from drugs to herbs...

 

Seratonin now depleted

 

Such commotion, I spilled emotions

Shead tears enough to fill an ocean

Wishing for a magic potion...

 

The tide has now retreated 

 

A jigsaw with a missing piece 

A Catholic church without a priest

Maybe I should pray to the east?...

 

A puzzel never to be completed

 

A year has passed 

Good weather, like luck will never last

A dark future, a bright past...

 

Vicious circles are repeated

 

Dried out in the desert sun

What once was joy... No longer fun

The battle raged, but no one won...

 

I feel somewhat defeated 

 

 

  • Author: Syd (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 22nd, 2018 06:01
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 38
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  • brokenmirrors

    Very creative. I can feel the regret that you so eloquently describe.

    • Syd

      Thank you Brokenmirrors, I'm glad my feelings shone through the poem.

      - Syd

    • w c

      Nice rhythm and rhyme.

      • Syd

        Thank you W C I'm glad you enjoyed the poem, the rhythm and rhyme. I appreciate you reading and leaving feed back.

        - Syd

      • kitcat

        Full of sorrow Syd you written that Brilliant very deep very sad

        • Syd

          Thank you Kitcat, I tend to write about how I feel at the time. Thank you reading and leaving feed back, much appreciated

          - Syd



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