I played with words
Adjectives, nouns and verbs
Subjects covered from drugs to herbs...
Seratonin now depleted
Such commotion, I spilled emotions
Shead tears enough to fill an ocean
Wishing for a magic potion...
The tide has now retreated
A jigsaw with a missing piece
A Catholic church without a priest
Maybe I should pray to the east?...
A puzzel never to be completed
A year has passed
Good weather, like luck will never last
A dark future, a bright past...
Vicious circles are repeated
Dried out in the desert sun
What once was joy... No longer fun
The battle raged, but no one won...
I feel somewhat defeated
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Author:
Syd (
Offline) - Published: March 22nd, 2018 06:01
- Category: Reflection
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Comments3
Very creative. I can feel the regret that you so eloquently describe.
Thank you Brokenmirrors, I'm glad my feelings shone through the poem.
- Syd
Nice rhythm and rhyme.
Thank you W C I'm glad you enjoyed the poem, the rhythm and rhyme. I appreciate you reading and leaving feed back.
- Syd
Full of sorrow Syd you written that Brilliant very deep very sad
Thank you Kitcat, I tend to write about how I feel at the time. Thank you reading and leaving feed back, much appreciated
- Syd
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