Our Love
Together
Once again
We celebrate our love within
You the one
That I adore
The other half of a love that soars
Flying better than we did before
Love
Dear love
To guide us now from up above
Worthy
And royal
Like oaks planted in fertile soil
To begin
Again
To be each others best of friends
We found love,
Real love
From the source up above
And tempered
In the flames
Our love as steel that remains
Not simple
But profound
Our love the thing that makes our crowns
Stronger now
And good
With our strength understood
Two in love
And expecting much
With the blessing of God given us
Two ships in the night
With each other shining light
And for each other
Careful there
With God the lighthouse we declare
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hello w.c i love how you have mentioned flight, ships, oaks and crowns. a lovely and well thought out poem 🙂 he is the much needed wing,
i especially love these lines
''And tempered
In the flames
Our love as steel that remains
Not simple
But profound
Our love the thing that makes our crowns
Stronger now''
And good
With our strength understood ''
steel is very strong and so can love! great idea here! i love your mention of crowns, because it makes me think of a king and a queen lol, both strong , both working together
hello yellowrose. i really appreciate your comments. I love writing about love. It's such a wonderful and powerful thing to experience. Of faith, hope and love. The greatest of these is love. Smile, because your comments brought a smile to my face. Take care.
A fine and thoughtful write wc.
Thanks orchidee. I value your feedback.
Absolutely beautiful!
Thank you!
Hey, Resa! i'm glad you enjoyed the poem. Thanks for your support!
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