Our Love

w c

Our Love

 

Together

Once again

We celebrate our love within

You the one

That I adore

The other half of a love that soars

Flying better than we did before

 

Love

Dear love

To guide us now from up above

Worthy

And royal

Like oaks planted in fertile soil

To begin

Again

To be each others best of friends

 

We found love,

Real love

From the source up above

And tempered

In the flames

Our love as steel that remains

Not simple

But profound

Our love the thing that makes our crowns

Stronger now

And good

With our strength understood

 

Two in love

And expecting much

With the blessing of God given us

Two ships in the night

With each other shining light

And for each other  

Careful there

With God the lighthouse we declare

 

 

 

  • Author: w c (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 26th, 2018 02:32
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Caring dove

    hello w.c i love how you have mentioned flight, ships, oaks and crowns. a lovely and well thought out poem 🙂 he is the much needed wing,

    i especially love these lines

    ''And tempered
    In the flames
    Our love as steel that remains
    Not simple
    But profound
    Our love the thing that makes our crowns
    Stronger now''
    And good
    With our strength understood ''

    steel is very strong and so can love! great idea here! i love your mention of crowns, because it makes me think of a king and a queen lol, both strong , both working together

  • w c

    hello yellowrose. i really appreciate your comments. I love writing about love. It's such a wonderful and powerful thing to experience. Of faith, hope and love. The greatest of these is love. Smile, because your comments brought a smile to my face. Take care.

  • orchidee

    A fine and thoughtful write wc.

    • w c

      Thanks orchidee. I value your feedback.

    • Resa71

      Absolutely beautiful!
      Thank you!

      • w c

        Hey, Resa! i'm glad you enjoyed the poem. Thanks for your support!



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