Pain makes life run thin
Makes the body go numb to the touch
Lost in transaction
Never to find a connection
Seeking but never finding
Seeing but never believing in yourself
Lost and giving up
Broken but don’t care
Simple but out of place
Easy as I hide
Tremble of the thought of no more
Blank is my expression….
As pain makes life run thin
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The_One_That_Got_Away (
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interesting poem , i like the wording in this .. '' pain makes life run thin'' pain does nothing to help life.
Scary to think that you / the subject may have experienced so many negative interactions that the term "Lost in transaction" was warranted ~ it's very effective!
Regarding the "tremble" ~ was it a shudder of defeat, or a reluctance to let go of hope? / Does the subject really no longer care, or is their 'indifference' only a shield and their "blank expression" a mask?
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