Dear You
How have you been?
I hope everything is okay
I know you found another man
I am happy for you, is all I'm trying to say
Please, just write back when you can
-E Knox
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Author:
E. Knox (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I was playing with the feature that lets others watch as a poem is typed. I though I would use it to write something showing contrast between what we want to say and what we actually do. If you could, please take a few minutes to watch the poem as it is typed in order to get the full effect. Hope you enjoy
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I watched this and it revealed much more than the simple stanza at the end. You can tell the first two 'real 'verses flow with far greater sentiment and then when you end with the stanza people see above, read alone it is so much less. I think when we hide what we really mean it never flows with the same passion as Truth.
Hope that makes sense
It makes complete sense, and that is what I was trying to portray with this poem! So glad I was able to get the message across! Thank you for watching the whole thing!
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