As I stick the needle into my vein
Fuck knows why I am doing this again
Going on a trip to the unknown
Like a dead bird that has never flown
Down the deep dark alleys I see a tree
And somehow it's talking to me
I respond with laughter tears and pain
The black clouds open with spiky rain
My body heavy and wet I fall through the ground
Screaming with fear but there is no bastard around
My heart pounding with red sweat from my pores
With dark visions my head is cracking and so sore
I am pulled away with the speed of light
Looking up at patchy skies with stars so bright
Back in my bed with knotted sheets on the floor
I struggle for the needle as I need more
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Comments3
I’ve never used Intervenous drugs.
However, I once had a roommate who was a recovering heroine addict.
She once told me that “ heroin leaves a hole in your heart, A void that can never be filled “
Anyway, Awsome write!
Resa:)
Thank you Resa for your nice comment
Yes I agree drugs destroy lots of peoples lives so sad
Hi Kitcat. The title drew me in straight away and what a great poem.
"I respond with laughter tears and pain
The black clouds open with spiky rain"
I loved those lines. Despite the impression you may get from some of my poems I have never used intravenous drugs, or anything as a addictive as crack/heroine. If I did though then I'm sure I could relate to this piece. Brilliantly written. I look forward to reading more from you later.
- Syd
Oh! Thank you so much for placing into one of your favorites your a star 🌞
Hi Syd
Thank you for your great comment well appreciated I will get round to reading some more of your great ones
Myself I have never touched drugs I just try and get into peoples minds when I write, whether dark or humour etc but like I told you, I do love deep and dark stuff always have its different
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