Fierce, focused, I’m exuding self-control
Initiate my power, smash those goals
Graciously bite, to whoever says no
Hit hard back, with all of my life in tow
Trust in me and say goodbye to sorrow
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Author:
Miss M S Smith (Pseudonym) (
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- Published: April 16th, 2018 09:14
- Category: Unclassified
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- Users favorite of this poem: ForeverJesus6, Accidental Poet, Sam Cork.
Comments11
A fine write Maxine. Ohh, I can't be bothered. lol. That's my feeble effort to fight! lol.
Now c'mon Orchi, you're not even trying! heehee.
Haha we can all have our ‘can’t be bothered days’ mine where all Easter Holidays.
Back on it today!!
THANKS FOR SHARING MAXINE ~ I love Acrostics and Rhyming Acrostics are really difficult ~ I should know ! This neat Quintain has a powerful message "Don't lie down and submit ~ stand up and fight !" Half the words you use (like Fierce ~ Self-control ~ Power ~ Smash ~ Bite ~ Hit hard etc) are very assertive (aggressive even !) ~ No one is going to mess with you or give you grief ! WOW after digesting that I'm glad I'm your FRIEND ! Yours as always ~ BRIAN Love the resolve in you PHOTO !
Haha I’m a lovely person really. Thank you for your brilliant feedback.
Sometimes we need to make a stand to stop being treated like rubbish and fight for what you deserve.
Sometimes you have to take the bull by the horns and command your will. Take a stand and be proud. Great write Maxine.
This is exactly it! Thank you for appreciating ☺️
Great job on this rhyming acrostic! I agree with accidental poet. Awesome!
Thank you Christina. So pleased you enjoyed it.
Thank you Lawless, always a pleasire reading your feedback.
Saying Confidence! Enjoyed
Thank you Angel. Glad you enjoyed.
Very nice
Thank you ☺️
Love this short to the point poem. Very strong and relatable
Cheers ears ☺️
Writefully the eye of the tiger, haha I made up a word..I think. fierce!
Haha I like it. Thank you.
Great positive write. Sorrow is obviously now beaten.
‘Say goodbye to sorrow’ Thank you Gold.
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