onepauly

the bus ride

we're waiting for the bus

it stops for some of us

a few have exact fare

others a pass to show

we sit here and there

and are ready to go

as we are moving down the street

we feel the beat under our feet

putting us all in a trance

we are not aware

that the circumstance

is not put there by chance

as we reach our destination

lets think about emancipation

Comments4

  • Nicholas Browning

    Haha. A good one for sure. We should think about that shouldn't we. A nice work. Much enjoyed.

    • onepauly

      it's intended to be a work of good humor.
      ha! ha!

    • Maxine Smith

      This definitely is work of good humour. Light hearted and uplifting, enjoyable read.
      Inspiring for me todo something more fun.
      Loved it.

      • onepauly

        glad you loved it.
        ha! ha!

      • AllTheRandomThings

        This is great! I love the visual aspect you get from it, I was envisioning being on a bus while pondering on society and all its red type mysteries. awesome work!

      • kitcat

        Brilliant I enjoyed reading it and your so right it made me smile

        • onepauly

          your image and statement brought tears to my eyes.

          • kitcat

            Aww bless



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