up and atom and then some
good now we're getting it
i will surely relax
and build mountain stacks
coming from the good earth
for all i'm worth
putting mine to good use
not loose but tighter
a lot lighter
more for your might without a fight
for you and for yours
from heaven it pours
picturing that hammer of thors
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Author:
onepauly (
Offline) - Published: April 27th, 2018 05:01
- Comment from author about the poem: something to have fun with.
- Category: Reflection
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Comments6
wow, that hit me really hard. strong write, my friend.
hope you enjoyed it kevin.
more to come. I finally put my
photo on my profile page.
it took a long time
but I managed it.now you can see what I look like. ha! ha!
Great write Paul. Thoroughly enjoyed.
- Syd
I like writing poems
only good ones though.
Very nice rhythm and poem. Good job
-Theta
I'm always here,
checking out your poetry
appreciate it dude
scholar myself.
please don't tell anyone.
ha! ha!
Lol youur secrets safe dude
Sharp and good onepauly.
Excellent.
Keep writing
FineB
you too.
Such a heartfelt and expressive poem... Keep it up, Paul!
just something to make you smile.
A power-packed write Paul - - love the twist and play on words which add so much force to the read.
thank you for your kind comment.
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